“Also you have to make less obvious that you are just projecting your own person and how you want everyone else to see and treat you into your main character”
for the record, i take responsibility for the length of the previous chapter. it was my idea and i just had no idea how long it would take to accomplish every detail i wanted. i am super happy with how it turned out when i went back and re-read the whole thing, but it took a loooong time lol.
John Solomon… now that’s a name that takes me back. It was another time. Bush was going out, Obama coming in. You could drop the R-word and people who cared about it were the weird ones. Kids stared at computers instead of iPads. And we were all on webcomics. But detective, I don’t think you came here to listen to an old man’s stories. Something’s happened. He’s gone, isn’t he? And you want to know why.
the cool kids still use that word. it’s like a secret handshake, allegiance to bygone days when you would have to retype your entire post after the forum you were on bugged out
Googling John Solomon I found out that if you lived around 1930 and named your kid John Solomon he would become a notable sportsman in a niche sport like Australian rules football
“Also you have to make less obvious that you are just projecting your own person and how you want everyone else to see and treat you into your main character”
Whenever I’m writing the actions of a protagonist, I ask myself, “What would Ebony Dark’ness Demetia Raven Way do?” And then I do the opposite.
Next Chapter: Lady Avrice’s LAST FRIEND in the whole world BETRAYS her to SELL her to the Assassin Clan. The assassins are kinda hot
Katie would go on to say that the author has a habit of unnecessarily long and meandering story arcs that do little to add to character development.
or in which said development could have been completed far more succinctly without losing impact.
Maybe Pasqualo would say her readers shouldn’t be such a little bitch
everyone be nice plz <3
for the record, i take responsibility for the length of the previous chapter. it was my idea and i just had no idea how long it would take to accomplish every detail i wanted. i am super happy with how it turned out when i went back and re-read the whole thing, but it took a loooong time lol.
Poor Pasqie was ahead of her time.. her work would go on to find HUGE success as a Korean webtoon.
Oh no!!!
Her eyeworms are escaping!
I understood that reference.jpg
John Solomon… now that’s a name that takes me back. It was another time. Bush was going out, Obama coming in. You could drop the R-word and people who cared about it were the weird ones. Kids stared at computers instead of iPads. And we were all on webcomics. But detective, I don’t think you came here to listen to an old man’s stories. Something’s happened. He’s gone, isn’t he? And you want to know why.
the cool kids still use that word. it’s like a secret handshake, allegiance to bygone days when you would have to retype your entire post after the forum you were on bugged out
Googling John Solomon I found out that if you lived around 1930 and named your kid John Solomon he would become a notable sportsman in a niche sport like Australian rules football